Friday, July 9, 2021

term 2 reflections

Hi everyone , this is my writing that i had to finish in term 2 . Its been such  a busy term and it took me a long time.hope you enjoy.

8 comments:

  1. FROM MRS A @ NWS

    Kia Ora Brooklyn

    I enjoyed reading your writing in Task 3. I noticed you used some good descriptive words like: blue lightning eyes, massive, gigantic and dived. I wonder if next time if you could remember to use full stops and capital letters throughout your writing. When you are talking about yourself you need to remember to use a capital "I". I look forward to reading your next blog. From Mrs A.

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  2. Hi Brooklyn I like the descriptive words you used. Keep up the good work!!

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  3. hi brooklyn,
    yeah term 2 was really busy and nice blog

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  4. Hey Brooklyn

    Task three was well done! I love reading creative writing.. I like how there’s so much variety, a wizard, castles, monsters and dreams that could be real life or are they!

    How come your term was busy! Lucky you got a chance to share.

    Any updates about term three?

    Good job!

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  5. Hello brooklyn
    term 2 was really busy but we managed to get through all the stuff.I those descriptive words that you have used.Keep up the good work brooky

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  6. hi brooklyn,
    term to was super busy.
    Great work.
    keep up the good work.
    Bye!

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  7. Hi brooklyn!! I like h0w u showed us ur work in a d0c! this reminds me that the term was quite busy! Maybe u could tell us what was going on in the doc! -Zayd

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  8. Hi Brooklyn
    Your descriptive writing was very good and the task 1 words, just make sure to write what they are for like all the words starting with cr or stuff like that.And you are right term two was very busy.

    Great job Brooklyn byebye.

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